Copy Right LAWS!!!!!!!!
- These are somethings I have learned the first couple weeks of school. I have learned some of the laws of copyrighting like Fair use and creative commons. I have also learned how to make a prezi.
- I thought these two weeks of school was going to be hard trying to learn all this new stuff but it turned out to be really easy. I already knew some of the stuff she was teaching so that made me feel a lot better about this class.
- I have also learned how to cite sources like giving the link to whatever your copying.
- Schoology has helped out by keeping everything organized and we are able to play games related to are school work. That allows us to play games but learn at the same time.
- This is my first time ever blogging and I think I'm going to really like doing it.
Hello, I am your blogging partner.
ReplyDeleteNow over all your blog is better than most, but nobody is perfect and there are some mistakes.
So I am going to start from the top and go through it.
Now, first things first: Your first sentence. When you are going to list something, you always place a " : " before the things that you list.
Now with fair use, it is not capitalized, but Prezi is. You should also hyperlink it each time.
Now with your next paragraph, after you said "I thought these two weeks of school 'was'" the correct word to use instead of that would be 'were' and after 'hard' you should probably make it look like this: ' , but' so that it would be easier to understand.
Now in your third bullet, instead of using the word 'like' which is bland, and really has no affiliation with the subject. You could use 'by' instead.
Now in your fourth bullet: 'Schoology' should be hyper linked, placing an ',' before the word and would be better as well.
Now lastly, you are a tad bit repetitive with the word "like" so you should use a different word.
Other than those few things, I actually look forward to your next post! Since they are pretty intriguing to me.